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Thesis: While band geeks are classified within their own genre, they are the everyday
human being with a special talent on the side.

First topic sentence: Band geeks do not have their "own" personal style, but a collaboration of many different styles.

Supporting Details:Band geeks can be the Abercrombie or Hollister goers who are either afraid to admit to the fact that they enjoy band or the fact that they just doan't care and have a love for music. Band geeks can go in the direction of the emo or the so - called scene style of dress: the eyeliner, dark clothing, band t - shirts, or girl pants on boys. Then of course, you have the band geeks (like myself) that where whatever they choose to wear.

Transition:While different styles of dress infect the ways of band geeks, band geeks represent the everyday personn

Second topic sentence: The term band geek can be affiliated with any type of person and any type of personality.

Supporting Details: There are your classical nerd of the nerdiest types of band geeks: big glasses, nerdy clothing, and the occasional acne. But just like in any classroom, you've got the slackers, the "too good at their instrument and should be playing in a professional symphondic orchestra" type of students, the students who spend too much time playing their instruments, the students who are taking band in order to only have to take one half credit of physical education.

Transition: As I am laying out the common stereotypes of the band geek, there is one common true love - music.

Third topic sentence: Many of band geek thrive to make beautiful music.

Supporting details: Band geeks practice and work very hard as a soloist or as a team to make an audience fill up with satisfying tears. Band geeks live off of a music and appreciate what an art music really is. Band geeks don't thrive upon the ranking they receive when it comes to their quality of play. Band geeks just enjoy the sound of all the different instruments coming together as one to make the world's ears tingle with joy.

Conclusion: Bands geeks are just another wonderful creation within the average joes and high - acclaimers of the entire human race spectrum. Bands geeks dress to please themselves, not others and will act for themselves and not others. But, band geeks strive to make music for others - music to never be forgotten.

Good Device?
It is a good idea to grab your audience's attention. Be sure to include background information, define anything that your readers may not know, try and connect your readers to the topic of your essay, etc, etc.

Good conclusion?
As always restate your thesis and moint points, give an implication of action, think of analogies or examples so that the reader can get that final connection, and always go back and refer to what was said in the introduction.