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In general, I thought the writer of this essay did an excellent job in they history aspect as to who created the blog and what a blog actually is. Overall, the transitional and topic sentences were very clear and fluid. In many aspects, I didn’t like that fact that I had to keep on looking down on the foots to realized what the writer was really talking about. Thus, this essay would be most appropriate for the hardcore bloggers. In some ways, I thought this essay was too colorful and didn’t do a well enough job in getting straight to the many points that were offered. Thus, I thought too many different ideas were brought forth. Also, I thought the conclusion was week; for one thing, the writer didn’t summarize the main points in any shape or form. Also, the one paragraph at the top of page 559 just seems random - a filler in order to get to the writer’s next point.
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Emily-
I'm sorry to say, but you actually read a story out of the wrong section. You're writing about a report-not an argument:)
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